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July 9, 2009

Pleased to have received one of Haiku Bandit’s Dottie Awards for this July moon viewing poem:

a deep quiet —
feet soaked with dew
in the moonlit grass

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5 Responses to “:”

  1. Dalloway Says:

    yes, this is lovely… it sounds lovely

  2. Dalloway Says:

    the last 2 lines go so well together, Id never consider them precious. If youre not happy, you could change the first line… conjure up an image of a sleepwalker, someone deep in thought, someone troubled…

    just a thought

  3. Laure Says:

    quietness allows for other senses to speak. i like this.


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